Friday Fictioneers – 2/15/2013 – “The Chase” – Genre: Humorous Fiction

Friday Fictioneers

The Chase

“So, you’re telling me this is a statue of a guy who went to a brothel and spent the night with a hooker?” Sarah looked at George with skepticism.

“Yes.”

“Then, he realizes she is in love with him and he loves her?”

“Still a winner.”

“He’s afraid of marrying a prostitute, so he runs?”

“You’re good.”

“So, it’s him running and the hooker trying to get him to stay?”

“Um, … no.”

Sarah looked at him.

“Actually, he forgot to pay. It’s the owner of the brothel holding on.”

George decided it was time for him to run away…

By kindredspirit23, on February 13, 2013 at 10:19 pm, under Friday Fictioneers, Humorous. Tags: Chase, friday fictioneers, hooker, love, prostitute, running away. 42 Comments

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Ankita On February 19, 2013 at 10:57 pm
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Hehehehehe.. Hilarious! 😀

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- kindredspirit23 On February 20, 2013 at 12:37 am
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  🙂 Thanks!
  
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rich On February 17, 2013 at 1:04 pm
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something is confusing me and i can’t figure it out. why is he running away? is she a hooker too and he doesn’t want to pay her?

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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) On February 15, 2013 at 6:05 pm
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Ha, that was funny

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- kindredspirit23 On February 15, 2013 at 9:05 pm
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  Thanks!
  
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Sarah Ann On February 15, 2013 at 5:53 pm
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Fantastic last line. Thanks for a great laugh.

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- kindredspirit23 On February 15, 2013 at 9:05 pm
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  Seems funny is the winner this week.
  
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elappleby On February 15, 2013 at 1:36 pm
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Fabulous! Made me laugh out loud – thank you ;D

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- kindredspirit23 On February 15, 2013 at 3:19 pm
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  So happy I have made so many smile and laugh.
  
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readinpleasure On February 15, 2013 at 12:19 pm
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I am luaghing here. 🙂 A delightful and great take on the prompt;. 🙂

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- kindredspirit23 On February 15, 2013 at 3:19 pm
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  Glad you found it funny!
  
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kz On February 15, 2013 at 7:33 am
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LOL thanks for the laugh, Scott! ^^ very original

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- kindredspirit23 On February 15, 2013 at 9:37 am
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  Glad you liked it.
  
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bert0001 On February 15, 2013 at 5:49 am
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LOL

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newpillowbook On February 14, 2013 at 10:27 pm
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That’s funny! And completely unexpected. What an original story – and you started from one of the oldest cliches around. Great job.

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 11:04 pm
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  Thank you.
  
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rochellewisoff On February 14, 2013 at 9:51 pm
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Cute story, Scott. Give Tamika a pat on the head for me. 😉

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 11:03 pm
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  I will. 🙂
  
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train-whistle On February 14, 2013 at 9:00 pm
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love your humor. great dialogue.

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 9:33 pm
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  Thanks. I enjoy doing those types of stories.
  
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  - train-whistle On February 14, 2013 at 9:45 pm
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    me too! 🙂
    
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Jan Brown On February 14, 2013 at 8:04 pm
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Very funny! Hope George can sprint!

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 9:33 pm
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  Hell hath no fury…and all that, so he better.
  
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Sandra On February 14, 2013 at 2:28 pm
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Nice one! Made me laugh.

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 8:06 pm
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  Great! Just what I wanted.
  
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lingeringvisions On February 14, 2013 at 2:15 pm
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Cute, gave me a little chuckle.

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 8:06 pm
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  That’s what I wanted.
  
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  - lingeringvisions On February 14, 2013 at 8:06 pm
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    Mission accomplished! 😉
    
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sustainabilitea On February 14, 2013 at 10:19 am
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Besides laughing, I’m thinking that Sarah’s wondering about George’s knowledge of this. 🙂

janet

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 12:03 pm
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  Yeah, lol
  
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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 12:06 pm
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  Also, hence, his reason to run.
  
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  - sustainabilitea On February 14, 2013 at 12:07 pm
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    Exactly! Not a good Valentine’s Day for him, I’m guessing.
    
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40again On February 14, 2013 at 8:07 am
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Still chuckling! Thanks for enlarging the photo so we can see the hanger-on, couldn’t make it out before. Love the humour

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Iris On February 14, 2013 at 8:01 am
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You made me laugh, nice 🙂

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 12:04 pm
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  Good!
  
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thehappyhugger On February 14, 2013 at 5:33 am
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Very funny, Scott 😆

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 12:04 pm
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  I thought so! lol
  
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Tad On February 14, 2013 at 3:44 am
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Bahahaaahaa….Frickin’ HILARIOUS!

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 12:05 pm
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  Lol! Glad you liked it.
  
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Abraham On February 14, 2013 at 2:34 am
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LOLLLL!!! Very funny.

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David Stewart On February 14, 2013 at 1:16 am
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Great twist at the end. 🙂 I guess money is a stronger motivating factor than love.

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- kindredspirit23 On February 14, 2013 at 12:05 pm
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  Seems to be most places!
  
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