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“David and Goliaths”
by Scott L Vannatter
“If Jordan’s joshin’ us, I’ll clobber ’em,” stated Carter of the nasty Joelman twins.
“Ya right thar,” remarked Ian.
They walked to the crowd of kids, pushing their way thru.
Jodan cringed. He stuttered.
“Y-y-o-u-u c-c-an g-g-o f-r-r-e-e.”
“Darn betcha!”
They followed Jordan’s finger, walked to see what the heck it was.
They saw two old stone monuments that looked a little like huge batteries. They stared at Jordan.
“You have to walk between them,” he managed to yell.
The boys did so; lightning crackled and the pair disappeared.
“We better go!” Josh yelled over the cheering of the crowd.
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Namaste,
Scott
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I love the accents here!
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Ah, so they really are batteries. What a way to get rid of all the horrible people. Great idea. Really enjoyed.
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lol – Thanks!
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How creative was this? Nice one.
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Thank you!
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With boys, all you’d have to do is double-dog dare them and they’d go through, probably. 🙂
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Ah, an alternative way!
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Wonderfully creative. Now that’s one I haven’t seen yet. Where do you suppose the kids went? Good old fun, kid style. Hehehe!
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the crowd cheered.lol always a fan of your creativity ^^
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Love doing it.
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Hahahaha! I would run, too! Good job.
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🙂
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A very clever tale, Scott. I assume they went to another dimension, but we may never know.
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I sincerely doubt if they care either! 🙂
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Zip and they’re gone…
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Awesome just like you.. wish I had your creativity
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Thank you!
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I really liked this one Scott, a great take on the photo prompt, unexpected and fun. Well written also! 🙂
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Thanks, I had a lot of fun with it.
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Ooh, I saw this pic and thought of ‘gate’ too, but you went with a completely different kind of gate. Most inventive, I liked it.
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Again, I had a lot of fun with it.
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Wow, that could be really useful! But since it could also be dangerous, I think it needs to be regulated right now!!!
janet
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Ouch! Government stepping in already?
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Never waste a crisis, right? 🙂 Hopefully this will all be kept quiet and the government will never find out.
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lol
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Strange little tale, Scott. That’s one way to get rid of someone you don’t like.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Works!
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Good one. Funny thing is, one of my first drafts used exactly the same idea! Handy way to get rid of your enemies. Sounds like nobody was sad to see them go!
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Great minds think alike.
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