Friday Fictioneers
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Friday Fictioneers – 6/14/2013 – PG13
Piano Man Extraordinaire
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Heckles walked out on the small stage, honked his nose, flapped his huge feet, and squirted water on the first two rows of onlookers with his flower lapel pin. He strutted over to the large upright and graciously plopped his rear on the seat. Cracking his knuckles, he brought his hands down hard on the keys.
During practice, the piano would bellow out high bells and whistles. Today, his hands sank down into the board followed, slowly, by the rest of him. To thunderous rounds of applause, his final thought was, “At last, I have finally put myself into my music.”
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Loved the description of the clown. really good….
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Wrote what I “saw”.
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Dear Scott,
Groaning and grinning. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Knew you would … well hoped you would like it. 🙂
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Ah, I chuckled. I love the last line! Well done.
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A chuckle from Heckles! How appropriate.
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hehehehehe
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At least! 🙂
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I love the last line. Nicely done.
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I had so much fun with that!
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I can’t believe nobody has mentioned the perfection of the picture, too! Very nice work here!
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Thanks, the pic is not mine…I actually took it from the main site, I thought.
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lol ^^ even the name Heckles made me grin ^^
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Good, I hoped someone would.
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And a very much enjoyed “groan!” escaped =)
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Yeah, I know! 🙂
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Very original 🙂
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🙂
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I wonder if he or she can partake of the lemonade out of lemons from inside the piano?
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I would say that he will be a little “keyed up” to think of it, but it should work – somehow.
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A true artist! Funny piece.
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Had fun with it.
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OH MY :O
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Thank you, Soma!
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He has put himself into his music indeed.
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🙂
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Nice ‘play’ on words. Grooaan! Made me grin, and a very evocative first paragraph.
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Thank you. Honored.
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lol, positive attitude till end.
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lol
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yep, my humor is present, just horrible at times.
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i knew there was humour there!
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🙂
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