Friday Fictioneers – 6/28/2013
Genre: fiction Rated Pg13
“Transition”
By Scott L Vannatter
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Herrall remembered the horrible noise and the feeling of flying.
He had felt a terrible impact at the center of his back and his head, but only for a second.
He also remembered seeing the large vehicle blur as it left his field of vision.
Now, he felt light and free. His body (no, not his body – he was looking at his body), his spirit(?) was slowly rising from his body and he could see it lying there, not moving. He could also see the license plate number. He smiled. Who would he tell? And what good would it do?
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Namaste,
Scott
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Who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!
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Yes!
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Interesting ghostly tale from the Spirit!
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Thank you!
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Intriguing.
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Thanks. I enjoy those types of topics immensely.
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Dear Scott,
Nice visual piece.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
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I liked this a lot. I liked the humor and the possiblities.
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Wonderful! That’s what I like to hear.
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I love how those last few lines expressed a freedom never felt before. Beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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Nicely told tale, well done.
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Excellent story! I wonder how many accident victims have been in a similar situation.
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Well, one way to find out isn’t going to help those of us still here!
Scott
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I guess you get super-vision when your spirit leaves your body. How else could he read the license plate number? One thing’s for certain, I’ll sleep better tonight knowing Perry is on the case. Good story, Scott.
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Perry to the rescue!
🙂
Scott
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How much can a ghost do?…Well if you believe in the movies… “Ghost” – the one with Whoopi Goldberg, or how about the one with the kid who ‘sees dead people?’ I think Harrall has more than half a chance 🙂
Uh, oh…the parimedics are coming they might just bring Harrall around and then…if he can only remember….’Thump, Thump!’
Thanks for the visit and the link. Very helpful. Please thank Indria for the photo.
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🙂
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I like how you manage to combine humour and tragedy at the same time!
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Glad that was apparent to you. I wondered if it would come out.
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I really like the detached, humorous, thoughtful nature of your main character.
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Thanks. I wondered if those aspects would come out as I intended.
Scott
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Very original and enjoyable read.. Love it Scott, What Perry said, I’ll check in with my guardian angels and ask for their advice on potential spiritual interactions with living humans. xx
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Never thought of that. Perhaps a job in the police department for Ghost Whisperer? 🙂
janet
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There’s a thought.
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Oh how frustrating!
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Would be, wouldn’t it?
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Hi it felt as if i was watching a bollywood movie clip. could relate this post to a poem I wrote
http://chinkslounge.wordpress.com/2013/04/30/napowrimo28-white-it-was-when-i-died/
Namaste
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Uh, great write! Having btdt in a dif situation, I so totally relate. Very intense! 🙂
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oh love how easily you paint a story into small canvases
Now that he knows the number I hope he gets to haunt too 🙂
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“And what good would it do?”… yes, the perfect question to ask. maybe he should get back on the driver, torture him a bit? ^^ thank you for the photo, by the way 🙂
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You are welcome. Indira allowed me to use it.
Scott
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Thanks Scott for my photograph. It was really an accident photograph. Very good story.
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thank you for the photo 🙂 a great shot
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Yup! Spot on, Scott. Good story.
Thank Indira for the prompt, too!
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Good take on a great photo. Thanks. 🙂
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Back at you!
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Nicely told!
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very good! 🙂
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Thanks!!!
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I dunno, I’ll see if I can follow up for him. I’m on it, Scott!
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lol ok!
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