FSF – Lillie McFerrin – Five Sentence Fiction – Beauty – Rated PG

Five Sentence Fiction – Beauty

What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.

The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.

This week: Beauty  After reading my story below, click >Here< for the rest.


Beauty Girl

By Scott L Vannatter

Her name was Helen; it was ironic since her parents had not known about her when she was born.

She grew up and, sadly, at length she decided (as did others) that it would be best if she wore a veil at all times when around people.

She sought suitors, telling all the truth and turning down no one determined to win her.

The latest in a long line of men kissed her hand and, when she lifted the veil, his heart stopped, literally.

Helen knew first hand that being the most beautiful creature in the universe was filled with its own problems; she sighed and asked for the next one to enter.




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  • gotmeghan  On September 6, 2013 at 8:08 pm

    It’s kind of like Medusa, but instead of having the power to turn people into stone, she could kill them. Interesting.


  • illsagorrey  On September 6, 2013 at 7:57 pm

    Oh gosh, I can relate. This is a problem I have all the time! 😉
    Thanks for visiting at The Living Dead.


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