Time for Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’s Friday Fictioneers – a neat little 100 (+/-) story written by all entrants based on the photo below. After reading my selection, which follows the pic, click > HERE < for the rest. Enjoy!!!
Copyright-Dawn Q. Landau
Little Building, Big Surprise
By Scott L Vannatter – 100 words
Carolyn walked the shore of the lake. It was a decent size and had the usual drop sheet of items scattered at the water’s edge. When she saw the building, pink and small with steps leading up to it, she stopped and stared. The boy at her side did the same.
“Can we stay there?” he asked, obviously tired.
“Let me check,” she returned.
She walked up the steps and pushed in the door. The smell had already reached her nose, but she wanted to be sure. The dead had put up a good stand here.
“Sorry, need to walk.”
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Namaste,
Scott
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Cool stuff here, Scott, lots of questions, lots of clues.
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And they all will continue. She is surprising me as well. We will see what happens.
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Ugh.
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🙂 A good, solid, honest reaction!
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He had no idea what she found.
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I sincerely doubt she told him.
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Oh that’s creepy…Imagining a dead body at a beautiful place is not good. Loved the story.
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You can read some of her other adventures on her page at my blog!
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Sure !
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I wasn’t expecting that at all. Nicely done.
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Good, I love surprising people.
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Unique thought with this prompt. Nice dialogue.
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Well done, with an unexpected twist at the end, Scott.
janet
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nice episode, scott. great how you were able to connect the photo with carolyn’s story
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I must admit that one was a doozey!
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Very Nice one.
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Dear Scott,
I think I’d keep walking, too. Nice one.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Very effective, I liked the terse economy of dialogue in this – it worked well.
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Thank you very much.
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