Flash Friday – Time Travel – Carolyn – Horror R – 01/10/2014

Once again, Rebekah Postupak brings you all of our stories based on the photo below and the idea of “time travel” from her blog entitled Flash Friday.  140-160 words gives enough space to test your writing and see how much interest you can generate.  After reading my entry below, click > HERE < to see the rest of the selections.  Enjoy!!!

Source: Wawona Tree Road. Photo by the National Parks Service.

Those were the Days

By Scott L Vannatter – 158 Words

@SVBookman

Carolyn took Billy’s hand and guided them both down the woodsy path.  They had not seen any night crawlers in almost two weeks and it was getting a bit easy to think, imagine they were all gone.  She stepped, for a moment, into her own personal time machine in her mind.  It was so simple to just imagine Billy’s hand as that of her daughter’s and how it had felt to sit in their car as it drove through the tree trunk at that wonderful national park.  What was the name?  Yosemite?  It had been a gloriously wonderful day, full of joy and surprises of the grand variety.  That little hand in hers…

Her mind came back to reality.  Her daughter had died of Cancer and this young man was Billy, whose father was now in that same place with her daughter, all because she…no, it was not her fault.  Those things did it.

“You okay?” Billy asked.

______________________________

Carolyn’s full adventures are contained in the Carolyn page on this blog.  Enjoy!!!

Namaste,

Scott

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  • thehappyhugger  On January 13, 2014 at 12:57 pm

    Sad writing but always good, Scott. I just love the photo.

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  • A Star on the Forehead  On January 11, 2014 at 1:51 am

    Scott, I am late but I want to wish you a Happy New Year! I hope 2014 showers you with an infinite amount of love, peace, health and all kinds of blessings! 🙂

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    • kindredspirit23  On January 11, 2014 at 2:58 am

      Well the same to you. Your spirit is always so vibrant and colorful.
      You are the source of a great deal of blessings for me by just being my friend.
      Thank you!

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