Friday rolls around again and with it, Friday Fictioneers! Hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, these 100 (or so) word snippets form complete stories to amuse (and abuse?) the reader. After reading mine below, click >HERE< for the rest. Enjoy!!!
The Challenge – 100 Words
“Ah, Banzi,” said the Kung-Fu Twisted Hand expert, “You need only get from this side of the tree grove to the other without touching the ground within the grove and you will have earned your next level.”
Dean stared at the immense grove of twisted and gnarly trees and tried to imagine such a task.
“Yes, Master.”
The Master then slipped a blindfold on the boy. “Now, you are truly ready.”
The boy took the blindfold off and sighed. “It cannot be done, Master.”
The Master smacked the boy’s head. “All you had to do was walk around the grove.”
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Namaste,
Scott
Comments
Dear Scott,
We used to watch Kung Fu. I could see this scene. Good spoof.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yeah, you got it well, Grasshopper.
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haha hilarious 🙂
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Thanks, Dear. I appreciate the comment.
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Humorous twist! Nicely done!
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🙂
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You must have a high IQ. Good story and fun trying to figure it out! Thanks, Nan 🙂
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According to the tests, I do. But ,sometimes…
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fresh take.. unique among all I read this time ! 😀
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Thank you. That means a lot to me.
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very nice ending. Now who would have thought of that.
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🙂
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Those kung fu masters are so tricky, aren’t they? Good one, Scott.
janet
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A lot of memories tied up with that one. Mostly from books and TV and movies.
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Good one! Loved the build-up as well as the twist at the end 🙂
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Glad you liked it.
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Very clever! Sometimes the answer is so obvious we can’t see it.
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Precisely!
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Well done, really made me smile Scott
Dee
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Thanks, Dee!
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Haha! So clever. I love it.
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Thanks!
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Funny story and lovely ending 🙂
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Thank you, Dear Lady
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Hah – I would have failed the test too!
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Without much doubt, I think we all would have.
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A corker! Really made me smile. Well done.
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🙂
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Scott,
Well done ending! And oh how funny!
Regards
Jim
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Thanks! I love those types of stories!
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