Friday Fictioneers – Robomonster Fan – Humorous – PG13

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields hosts Friday Fictioneers.  This week, read my entry below, then go > HERE < to enjoy the rest!

Copyright – Douglas M. MacIlroy

Johnny put the helmet on.  It fit, but was stuffy and heavy.  He walked around his room talking in the procured echo chamber he had around his head.

He knew there would be a sequel.  It was, in his opinion, the greatest film of all time.  Forget what the others said.  They did not know.  They had not studied and realized, as he did, the significance to this movie.

“The Great Guidance” was becoming worried.  He had released the dinosaurs and humans had returned.  Now, this child, was stirring up trouble.  He scratched his helmet and returned to his cave.

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Namaste,

Scott L Vannatter

PS – I realized that this particular story might not work around inside many people’s heads just right.  If you are having trouble, here’s some background – http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robot_Monster

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  • Hala J.  On April 19, 2014 at 10:44 am

    Funny stuff! I, too, wasn’t familiar with the movie but the link was really helpful. I love super-awful movies…there’s a weird charm to them.

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  • Amy Reese  On April 18, 2014 at 4:47 pm

    That sounds like a real winner of a film! Oops, it was all a dream in the end. What a cope out! Great take. I enjoyed your story.

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  • patriciaruthsusan  On April 18, 2014 at 8:17 am

    Good story. Some of those old films were so bad they became famous for it like that one. Well written. 🙂

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  • rochellewisoff  On April 18, 2014 at 5:55 am

    Dear Scott,

    Never saw the film. Thank you for the link. Fun story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  • sustainabilitea  On April 17, 2014 at 12:41 pm

    OK, it makes sense once I read the information in the link. I like that he scratched his helmet.

    I don’t think, though, that “procured” is the word you want here: ” he had procured around his head.” He didn’t buy it around his head. I think you want something that means he’d put it on his head, right, such as “placed over his head?” If you want to say he bought it, you need to rearrange that sentence.

    janet

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  • aliciajamtaas  On April 17, 2014 at 11:13 am

    Scott, I couldn’t get the link to open so haven’t a clue what the story is about.

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  • brainsnorts  On April 17, 2014 at 8:56 am

    yup. one of the worst films ever made. well done.

    Liked by 1 person

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