Mondays Finish the Story – Dance Fever – Rated PG13 – Humorous

Barbara brings us Mondays Finish the Story.  Use the beginning sentence and the picture prompt along with another 100-150 words to create your story.  Mine is below, the rest are > HERE < Enjoy!!!

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Dance Fever

By Scott L Vannatter – November 25, 2014 (150 Words)

“Dance as if no one is watching!” Stephanie yelled at George as they entered the disco hall. George tried to take in the multitude of people gyrating in motion. George wanted to run out, but he really wanted Stephanie to like him.

He stepped out on the floor with her and closed his eyes. His feet began to tap and he began to forget all those around him.

After a bit, George felt a hand on his waist, then her other hand crept just a bit lower on his backside. His mind was going wild. Stephanie was enjoying this, too! He looked forward to the rest of the evening.

When the set of songs finished and a slow dance began, George opened his eyes to try and dance with Stephanie to the romantic song. With a start he realized that the woman he was now with was not Stephanie, who he saw in tears leaving the building.

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Namaste,

Scott

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  • Lyn  On November 26, 2014 at 9:16 pm

    Oh boy, it never pays to dance with your eyes closed. Poor Stephanie and poor George. Good take on the prompt 🙂

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    • kindredspirit23  On November 28, 2014 at 4:33 pm

      Yes, it really wasn’t quite humorous, given the apparent outcome, but the situation certainly was.

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  • EagleAye  On November 26, 2014 at 1:58 pm

    Oh, so sad for Stephanie. Unfortunately, George found himself at a loss. Great story that really pulled me in and surprised me at the end. Well done!

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  • babso2you  On November 26, 2014 at 11:23 am

    Poor Stephanie! Good story Scott! Thanks for participating and stay tuned for this coming Monday’s challenge! ^..^

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