Lillie brings us this week’s Five Sentence Fiction prompt: Forgotten. Mine is below; the rest are >HERE< Enjoy!

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Forgotten
“Overlooked”
By Scott L Vannatter – February 26, 2015
She walks slowly and a bit unsteadily down the avenue, carrying all her worldly belongings with her, dropping her umbrella and being way too tired to retrieve it.
Her hopes and dreams have come with her; they are her only currency to make it in this bitter, dirty world.
A man steps from the shadows and approaches her, knowing all too well she is overly-tired and will not run away.
He gives her his oft-made speech about success and money and all she has to do is…
She, like thousands of almost nameless young girls disappear, their hopes and dreams a poor defense against the predators lurking and waiting.
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Namaste,
Scott
Comments
Great job packing so much into 5 sentences. I liked how your monetized her hopes and dreams into currency. Very striking use. Even they left her in deep debt.
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Wonderful summary. Enjoyed the critique.
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Nicely done
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Thank you so much!
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