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Picture Courtesy of Sandra Cook.
It was nearly dark, that weird time when shadows played with the minds.
The elder tree did not mind the games, but had not time at the moment. He had a calling.
The open knothole, turned up, began to glow and a pale yellow light shot forth to the clouds.
The beam bounced off clouds, sailed from any surface, striking all other trees who responded in kind.
Slowly, they started to move, ripping their roots from the ground. Their many legs now carried them faster and faster across landscapes, crushing homes and people in their wake.
The invasion had begun…finally.
Word count: 100 words
Namaste,
Scott
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Very interesting take on the prompt. Chilling, gives me goosebumps.
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Always glad to hear that, well, on my horror stories, anyway!
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Wooooh! This was great… reading it to Oomph!’s “Auf kurs” added an interesting feel as well.
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If it works, I say, Do it!
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They’ve been lying in wait all this time! Nice take on the prompt!
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Yes, now they won’t “leaf” us alone!
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I could feel ur work … Great one 😉
See my blog as well help me grow … Your suggestions will always be welcomed❤
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Well, that will be the end if the trees turn against us. A sniff of John Wyndham here. Great stuff
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Ah, did Wyndham have a particular piece for this? I have not read him, but know of him.
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I was thinking The Day of the Triffids – plant life threatening mankind. Wyndham is definitely worth a read I think. It’s probably seen as a bit middle class and almost cosy for today’s tastes, but some of the atmospheres he creates at the start of ‘Triffids’ are terrific.
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I will try to look into it. I know there is a movie, too!
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If I have a dream about trees like these tonight I’ll blame you! Brilliant .
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Tree mendous!
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Beautiful set-up. scary ending. The Attack of the Trees!
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Thanks!
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I remember seeing a cartoon like this scene years ago. Those trees were mean and evil. I remember thinking it was odd entertainment for children.
Thanks for rekindling that memory.
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Had me thinking, when you say that, of the Casper scene of the song “We are the Gremlins”…
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Dear Scott,
You get three C’s. Chilling, Creepy and Clever. I love love love the title.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I enjoyed it with that title!
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Scary and really intriguing too.
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Thanks
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Now, this really is scary! Excellent.
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Thanks
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i think we should start being kind to trees while they’re still rooted to the ground. 🙂
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I think that once they are moving, you are right, a bit too late.
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Wow, evil tree 🌲 invasion! Nicely done
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I saw it when I looked at that tree….couldn’t help it.
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Sounds like we need to get a backfire going here. O cruel me.😁
This would make a great campfire tale, in the woods with trees all around.
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Um, yeah, if you want the kids awake – ALL Night!
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Ha! I knew tree-hugging would pay off in the end somehow. Maybe the trees will be lenient to folks who were kind to them. 😉 Love the idea of this.
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Hmm, either you are onto a good plot idea or barking up the wrong one.
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You never know. It might branch out into other things too. 😉
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Great reply to a bad pun…
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EEEK! Oh my days!
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I will take that as a compliment!
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I’m taking it seriously – so compelling is your writing!
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That is music to my ears…thank you
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You’re welcome!
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The Day of the Triffids! Good stuff!
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Oh, my gosh! I haven’t yet seen that movie. Been meaning to. Guess I will now.
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The first thing I remembered was The Two Towers and the invasion on Saruman’s tower by the Ents. Good one, Scott.
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Oh, wow! I remember all that now…How cool!
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Scary – the stuff of nightmares!
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Ah, again, you think like I do…
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Chilling and creepy.
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ah, no great compliments can be given to a horror writer!
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You’re welcome.
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