One of the exercises I had my students do in English class was to write poetry. There were shouts of protest, but I persisted. I told them that, they had to do it, and so did I.
So, we all sat there for 30-50 minutes and wrote and shared poetry. I wish I had kept more of their poetry, but I just have to remember that it was special. I thought that, perhaps, I would share some of what I wrote on the spot. It’s not great stuff, but think that it was right then, whatever was on my mind, and done within the class period. I hope you like it. Here are two: If you really like it, I can do some more. I, of course, kept mine.
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Cat in a Window – SLV 052107
Furry feline, stretched out full on the
Living room carpet. The breeze beckons and
A quick push lets the world in.
The slumbering tabby jerks to alert,
Nose high, searching for clues. Leaping to
All fours, the creeping beast, moves silently,
The grace of wind sweeping across the leaves
Of summer. Airborne, fur and muscles stretch
Taut, reaching the pine ledge and settling
To watch the world separated by glass and
Screen.
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Listening to You – SLV 051007
Listening to you gets better with each word.
Hours spent separated only by distance.
Your days become mine and mine yours.
Our thoughts flow, blood of minds mingling
Into a singularity of the soul.
The more I listen, the more I understand
That part of you which is seldom shared.
The words weave into a touch, which
Melts into a caress. The caress becomes
A kiss and that kiss settles into love.
Listening to love; listening to you; both are the
Same.
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Namaste,
Scott
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I am not great at poetry, but I find that I steer towards it when I do writing prompts or challenges. I like playing around with them. I think yours are wonderful. 🙂
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Thank you. I am going to try my hand at Tanka next, I believe.
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Very well done especially the second poem!
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you had some creative students, wow!
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Now, those were my poems, but the students did write some. I just can’t find them.
Scott
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