It’s time for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by RochelleW. The idea: using the above photo prompt, create a complete story of 100 words (+/-). After reading my entry below, click > HERE < for the rest of the stories. Enjoy!
“Roller coaster”
Scott L Vannatter – 100 words
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“You got dees?” Armando asked Tellan.
“Sure,” Tellan wished he was as confident as he sounded. His bravado had gotten him into trouble before. This was not going to be an exception. He just hoped it was not his last.
He stared down the stone alleyway. The slope was steep. Each one-brick level had two 1/2 bricks raised up to the level of the stones above, a kind of track of stone. The tire was wider than the brick, so the ride was perilous.
He got it up to 30, then cut the engine in idle.
“Here we go, Amigo!”
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Namaste,
Scott
Comments
Dear Scott,
Hope his seat belt’s fastened. Thanks for the ride.
shalom,
Rochelle
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🙂
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Sounds like a bumpy ride! 🙂 Something needs to be fixed here, though: ” about half of each tired covered”.
janet
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I saw that. I was trying to say that the road bricks were covered by half the tire to show that it was an unbalanced ride.
I will look at it again.
Thanks,
Scott
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Oh! I think I got it fixed. Please check and let me know.
Scott
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Hi Scott,
Your story is a wild ride. Tellan sounds like one of those fearless, reckless drivers. And I just hope Armando isn’t prone to car sickness! Ron
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Ouch, that would be a mess!
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I can see the injuries already! Fun ride.
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Here we go
Down and away 🙂
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🙂
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Fun story, well done! But … is there a typo in the third paragraph, last line?
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