Five Sentence Fiction – Blades
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week: Blades
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FSF-Five Sentence Fiction – Blades
Genre: Fiction PG13
Scott L Vannatter
6/20/2013
Thomas stood in the center of the huge auditorium and stared at the diverse crowd who waited almost with impatience for whatever it was to start.
He slipped the blade from its ornamental scabbard on his back and ran his finger ever so lightly over the edge, drawing blood on his thumb; the katana looked as if it had never been used and, for some reason, that bothered him a lot.
He looked up at the dark-clad figure holding two blades similar to his own; the figure stepped into the dimly-lit center of the auditorium opposite Thomas and almost smirked as he bowed.
Thomas looked at his thumb and upward to his gi, his wrist glinting a bit from the watch he wore, and he smiled knowingly.
The bell sounded and the figure ran toward Thomas’ unmoving figure; one swipe and Thomas felt a bit of pressure and awoke from the dream to a reality that did not have him wearing an outdated timepiece.
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Namaste,
Scott
Comments
The ending jolted me. Wasn’t expecting a dream. BTW, I did have a dream where I was killed. Let’s just say it was strange and very disturbing but am here to tell about it. Ugh. Wonderful write!
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Glad you are here and thanks!
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Apparently, you can never die in a dream; you always wake up at the moment just before. Such a clever idea for the prompt and very intriguing. xx
http://40somethingundomesticateddevil.blogspot.co.uk/2013/06/five-sentence-fiction-blades.html
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I have fallen from great heights in a dream before. I have “felt” myself touch the ground, but always awaken before death.
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Always good, Scott…
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🙂
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nice piece. Works, ironically, in a timely manner. Randy
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This is a very unique little tale!
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I had a nightmare yesterday evening (I work nights) from which I literally woke screaming and punched my computer monitor, which is on the coffee table near the couch where I was sleeping. I wish mine had been about outdated timepieces!
My Undead in the Netherworld teammate Blooming Psycho wrote this bit for Five Sentence Fiction. You are so kind to always visit our strange little home, and we appreciate it!
http://undeadinthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2013/06/blades.html
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I like this one a lot.
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Good!
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